The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

The bar graphs illustrate the statistics on the happiness ratings for wedded people and single people in different age groups and the happiness ratings when married people have children in the US.

In general, it is clear that the level of happiness in married people is higher than single people and the effect of children on the happiness of wedded people is trivial.

In terms of married people, the proportion of happiness in different age groups just have a minimal movement, the ratings for the people fell into 18-20, 30-35-40, 50-64 and over 65 age groups is 45%, 44%, 40% and 44%, respectively. The people aged 65 and over is highest ranking in single people with 34% whilst other groups just have around 21,22 % level of happiness.

Moreover, married couples who have children over 18 years old will have the lowest data, at 41% in the married people group. That have children under 18 have the highest happiness with 44% while people who do not have children still be happy in your life with 44%.

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Average: 9.3 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...spectively. The people aged 65 and over is highest ranking in single people with 34% whils...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, still, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81714285714 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32112530373 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8890925377 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.5 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 22.9334400587 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309262151132 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187997980668 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111810300874 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2379927347 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992741401864 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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