the charts below show the working patterns of mothers with young children to care for
The charts reveal the working patterns of mothers with young children to care for in three categories.
First chart shows that mothers with youngest dependent child aged 0-2 years, mothers working part-time is 19%, while there is 11% of mothers who is working full-time. Second chart depicts mothers with youngest dependent child aged 3-4 years, as can be seen there is an increase of mothers working part-time (35%), but for mothers working full-time maintains in the same level.
The next chart gives information about the percentage of mothers working part-time with youngest dependent child aged 5-9 years increases by 13 % and for mothers working full-time, the percentage rises to 14%.
Finally, the chart 4 shows mothers working part-time with youngest dependent child aged 10 years changes slightly (45%), 26% of them are not working and mothers working full-time rockets drastically by more than double (29%) as many as the percentage in the previous chart.
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