The charts below shows the percentage is of students joining north west University

Essay topics:

The charts below shows the percentage is of students joining north west University.

The charts illustrate the proportion of students (students by faculty and non-US arts students) attending the University North West.

It is immediately obvious that there are significant contrasts between these two students’ categories.

It is crystal clear that, majority of students fond to focus on arts faculty around 23%. Furthermore, both science and computing faculties had similar quantity of students around 22%. Surprisingly, 9% of students attend for the engineering faculty. It is evident that medicine faculty is the least favorite faculty among the students around 5% and there are 6% of students in law faculty as well.

Moreover, merely 2% of African students tend to join the arts faculty, and on the other hand, the majority of South American students (79%) love to do arts in the North West University. Interestingly, there are notable number of European students prefer to join the arts faculty around 21%. Approximately same amount of Australian and Asian students love to enter to the arts faculty around 4% and 6%, respectively.

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Average: 4.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: students
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Suggestion: arts'; art's
...2% of African students tend to join the arts faculty, and on the other hand, the maj...
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...of European students prefer to join the arts faculty around 21%. Approximately same ...
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...and Asian students love to enter to the arts faculty around 4% and 6%, respectively....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34131736527 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89628530567 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2766184179 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252488918809 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118489612612 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102214943974 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181387457704 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121906158989 0.0819641961636 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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