The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.
The pie charts illustrate the results of a survey regarding students’ intentions with their MBA and what employers expect from hiring them.
it is clear that having better job possibilities is the main impetus for students to do an MBA degree. previous knowledge in the job and personality account for most of employers’ expectations from them, whereas qualifications were least important.
Regarding reasons for students to get an mba degree, the majority of students say they do it to have better employment rate. This is followed by better job performance and personal development, with 15% and 12% respectively. Less than one tenth of them want to help others through doing the degree.
Good personality accounts for 25% of the employers’ considerations before hiring them, with the same goes for their knowledge. The other 40% was divided equally for the candidates’ appearance and previous experience in connections with other people. qualifications only account for the rest one tenth of the qualities valued.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pect from hiring them. it is clear that having better job possibi...
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...petus for students to do an MBA degree. previous knowledge in the job and personality ac...
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... Regarding reasons for students to get an mba degree, the majority of students sa...
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...ience in connections with other people. qualifications only account for the rest one tenth of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75776397516 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33183356819 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5097233501 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275652403161 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114735463866 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891188577398 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184506903646 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661718174422 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.