The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Essay topics:

The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

The climate graphn shows the number of temperature and precipitation in kolkata during a particular period of time.The data is calibrated in milimeters and celcius.

To the begin, 50mm rain occurs in the first quarter of the year. It gradually increased before rise sharply to more than 250mm in june. In the month of July it rises to 330mm. Furthermore, it slightly decreased in the month of August. In the same way, it start decreasing continously towards downwards and comes to 300mm in the month of September. At the last, it largely decreased from 300mm to 150mm, 30mm and 20mm in the month of october, november and december respectively.

As far as trend concerned that the Kolkata temperature stands the coolest condition in beginning year. The figure levelling off in the average of 25 degrees in the month of march. Apart from this, it starts flactuation and gradually fall to nearly 20 degrees at the end of the year.

Overall, it is evident that monthly figure of precipitation in kolkata stabled moderately while the downfall take high percentage in the middle of the year.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...pitation in kolkata during a particular period of time.The data is calibrated in milimeters an...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...kata during a particular period of time.The data is calibrated in milimeters and ce...
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Line 3, column 4, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...brated in milimeters and celcius. To the begin, 50mm rain occurs in the first quarter ...
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Line 3, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he last, it largely decreased from 300mm to 150mm, 30mm and 20mm in the month of ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... november and december respectively. As far as trend concerned that the Kolkata...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, while, apart from, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97282608696 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8039212264 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7001612314 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201815382865 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700347244012 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514558940323 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115145163055 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246047747839 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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