In many countries women no longer need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring. To what extend do you agree?
Chains do not hold a marriage together. It is threads, hundreds of tiny threads, which sew people together through the years. In the current time of technology advancements, one of the most pressing concerned is regarding the given topic is that should females have to depend on males for their financial security or not? I completely agree with the statement and explore the dimensions of the topic through examples and observations in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, in the modernisation world, women have total independences of their own life and lifestyle inside the home and also outside at their work. Moreover, they should make their decision , by their own choice. As we seen, in past, women do not have any freedom to do anything. They have to depend on the males for fulfil their basic needs. For instance, at that time, after marriages, women always have to stay in home and take care of their homes and childers also and men go outside for work and earned money for their famliy. Women fully depends on male for the money but in the modern world women stands equally with the males and go outside from homes and earned money for fulfil their own desires.
Secondly, in the modernized world, womens have no longer need to get married because they are independent. They can earn their own income to fulfil their desires. For example, as we see in our past, many married womens were died due to the dowry system. Dowry system is the system in which grooms family demands to the bride family for large amount of money, expensive things etc. When brides family do not fulfil their demands , they torcher to the bride and create domestic voilece so if the women earn their own income they have no need to take money for her husband.
As we have seen that there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that the main reason for this reluctants is women self sufficient but it is not such a disaster that do not feel to get married. It is even good to an extent because due to that they can leave traditions behind and think more intellectualy about married and care about moralities and emotions of materials.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69553805774 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39575165898 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509186351706 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8782669072 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283671290649 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972281571279 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669056458372 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163895301638 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457092469146 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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