The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.
The diagram illustrate the stages of the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of production of the silk cloth. It is a clear and coherent representaion.
There are four stages in the life cycle of the silkworm ; from eggs to moth. The process of production of silk cloth have six steps; from cocoon to silk material.
At the first stage in the life cycle of the silkworm, the moth lays the eggs. After 10 days, a silleworm larva is hatch from the egg. These larva feed on mulberry leaves. Further, after four to six weeks the larva is covered with the silk thread. It takes between three to eight days for the production of full cocoon.
For silk cloth production, firstly select the cocoon and boiled it in the water. After boiling the thread that makes up the cocoon is unwonded, then several strond are twisted together. In fifth and sixth stage the thread can either be dyed and then woven into silk fabric or it can be woven first and then dyed subsequently.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the stages of the life cycle of the si...
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... illustrate the stages of the life cycle of the silkworm and the process of prod...
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...s of production of the silk cloth. It is a clear and coherent representaion. ...
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...k material. At the first stage in the life cycle of the silkworm, the moth lay...
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Message: Did you mean 'this larva' or 'These larvae', 'These larvas'?
Suggestion: This larva; These larvae; These larvas
... silleworm larva is hatch from the egg. These larva feed on mulberry leaves. Further, after...
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...akes between three to eight days for the production of full cocoon. For silk c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56818181818 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29468964389 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3431355593 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406502729016 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156158067451 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.205270084554 0.0843802449381 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319939032449 0.15604864568 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19700145451 0.0819641961636 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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