The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.

Essay topics:

The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the silk cloth.

The diagram illustrates the life process of the silkworm and the manufacturing of the silk cloth.

At the inital stage, the adult moth lay eggs on mulberry leaf. The eggs hatch after 10 days resulting in development of silkworm larvae which feed on mulberry leavea for next 4 to 6 weeks followed by the secretion of a substance known as silk thread. They start making cocoon around themselves and take 3 to 8 days to develop a complete cocoon. The silkworm than leaves the cocoon and becomes an adult moth who restarts the process again by laying eggs after 16 days.

The manufacturing of silk cloth begins with the selection of suitable cocoon which is put into water for boiling for a specific time. After boiling, approximately 300 to 900 m of thread is obtained by unwinding which is than twisted to get a strong thread. These thread are than either send for dye or weaving a fabric which is also send for dye after the cloth is obtained.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...r dye or weaving a fabric which is also send for dye after the cloth is obtained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61538461538 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54598820705 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9224759562 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167378274226 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902839855533 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12847353504 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187285738751 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165566532866 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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