Consumer goods have become the most important part of human lives.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Consumerism is a social and economic idology that encourage people to acquire more products and services in an ever increasing amount. In the current time of technological advacements, one of the most pressing concern regarding the given topic is that consumer goods: beneficial for the human lives or not? I shall explore the the some from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
At the begin, Consumer goods are the goods that are purchased for direct consumption to satisfy a human need or want. We can know that, there are many advantages of the consumer goods. Moreover, the first advantage of the consumer goods is satifaction. Most of the people consume goods to fulfile thier basic needs and for their own satisfaction. For example, people can consume goods to change thier lifestyle. Furthermore, in the modern ira, status symbol becomes the essential part in everyones life. In other words, people can consume more and more goods to upgrate their status at the higher position. For instance, a survey is conducted by the goverment that most of the people can consume goods to maintain thier status symbol.
In the contrary, there is also some disadvantages of consumer goods. The disadvantage is that people can waste money to buy new goods and throw their old goods. This is called as throw-away society. People can throw the old things instead using them properly because they want to make their standard high by consuming more and more goods without think about money wastage. Moreover, people waste our money on goods that they often do not need. For example, in the present era, mobile companies launched new brands and more featured mobile phones. Especially, young people can throw their old mobiles and buy new mobiles to show their status symbol.
As we have seen that, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, it is well said that earth can satisfy everybody need but not the everybody greed.
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...arth can satisfy everybody need but not the everybody greed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03095975232 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54613801182 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520123839009 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2579917683 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231862065668 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078604336097 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618377188515 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113994048844 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085828657096 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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