Young people in disturbed economies tend to become violent causing destruction to life and property. What are the causes, impacts and remedies of such problem.
Money plays very important role in everyones life. With the rise in the modernisation. A man can transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking batefooted in the jungles to take the first step on the moon. Neverthless, through this essay, I will examine the possible reason for this trend and suggest some of the practical policies that authories could implement to reduce the violence causing destruction to life by disturbed economic.
To the begin, the first step is to underatand why this violence is caused? Broadly, there are two or three reasons for this. The first reason is unemployment. In the present time, people do not have jobs. Moreover, they do not have enough money to fulfil their basic needs. Apart from that, the relation between couples will become weak. sometimes it can create divorce situation between couples. Foremore, it can also create violence between friends and relatives. For instance, the solution to this problem is that, govenment should have to organise counselling through which people can understand their relation and do not create any violence.
Secondly, the one another reason behind this problem is needs. Due to the unemployment, people can not fulfil their needs and expenses because they do not have money to fulfil their necessaties. Moreover, they are understressed which caused harmful health problem to the people like heart problems as well as brain problems. Furthermore, they can also lose their mentality power. Apart from that, the solution to cure this problem that, the government should have to set up more and more companies and give opportunities to the youngsters to do jobs in that company. Moreover, give better salaries to the workers so they can also fulfil their needs.
In conclusion there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably be solved by providing jobs to the young peoples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1226993865 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67549381488 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6417017234 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112792512089 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321081831541 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355978046669 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712926092908 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239888421812 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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