Coal consumption by sectors in the UK in million tonnes

Essay topics:

Coal consumption by sectors in the UK (in million tonnes)

The table gives information about how much coal was consumed by four different sectors in the UK from 1975 to 2000.

Overall, the period between 1975 and 2000 experienced a decrease in coal consumption of all sectors. In addition, the figure for Power stations was the highest in this period.

The amount of coal used for Power stations in 1975 was 77.2 million tonnes, which accounted for two-thirds of the total coal consumption. This figure increased slightly to 89.6 million tonnes in 1980, but later decline sharply to 47.1 million tonnes in 2000.

It can be seen that Domestic, Industry and Services was 44 million tonnes, which accounted for one-thirds of total use. However, this number fell significantly to 6.6 million tonnes, 8 times as lower than that for Power station in 2000.

Votes
Average: 5.7 (9 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, third, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03007518797 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5565015456 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3213937622 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249850511672 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107512070166 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699054896031 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143200566026 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705030306503 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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