Comparison in expenditure by four main European countries.

Essay topics: Comparison in expenditure by four main European countries.

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The horizontal bar chart depicts the expenditure on the six main different consumer goods among four European countries, measured in Thousand Pounds.

Overall, Britain spent a significantly higher amount of money on these consumer goods with compared to other countries whereas Germany was at the bottom - among all countries - who invested in this consumer goods.

In details, majorly all these European countries spend lion's share on the photographic film and toys. Britain spent approximately the same amount on both but precisely, invested 5000 pounds more on the photographic film then as in toys. Italy and France spent the same monetary value on the toys - which were roughly 159 thousand pounds. While Germany spent the money on these both items without drastic variation, by investing 144 thousand pounds. The investment trend in the CDs was approximately replica of the aforementioned once, but on the smaller scale. Every European country spent on an average 4000-5000 less in the Cds then compare to the photographic film.

Out of the other items, Germany and France did the same financial expense on the perfume and personal stereos (143 thousand pounds). This expenditure follows the amount of money invested by France in these both goods - which was 146000 Pounds. However, on the top of this, Britain lead in the investment on the perfumes, Tennis rackets, and personal stereos. In spite of this, they - British people - invested nearly 3500 more on perfume compared to the rackets and personal stereos.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a Thousand'.
Suggestion: A Thousand
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'in spite of']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275735294118 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.0808823529412 0.116061578633 70% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106617647059 0.0759168565197 140% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0441176470588 0.0366838410393 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00367647058824 0.0131127313244 28% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.139705882353 0.155750635184 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0220588235294 0.0379272487307 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6896309885 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0110294117647 0.0210936926555 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.139705882353 0.0948980150116 147% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0110294117647 0.00967000014798 114% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1523.0 1161.00487805 131% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.9 126% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14112903226 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383064516129 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.318548387097 0.247514529752 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201612903226 0.171178102325 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0927419354839 0.112407865282 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6896309885 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.546246751206 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.5572121031 49.3433353143 94% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6666666667 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8862426544 42.9750493124 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 23.0094962315 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 52.5215053763 47.7609492067 110% => OK
Elegance: 3.4 2.94281807926 116% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146227409049 0.418131533498 35% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.17413847282 0.181151798455 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0792549014731 0.0850326197045 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683385594739 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165208165923 0.157042692854 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790354676676 0.228904883108 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753587446077 0.108899403657 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.334945057152 0.367819155151 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128032696824 0.0812612215331 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131514584089 0.316326947829 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807862732511 0.0921553760075 88% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 3.02926829268 231% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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