The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram delineates the life cycle of large salmon fish in three main stages of development. The size and the location variation throughout it's life is shown.
First, an adult salmon fish, which is about 70-76 cm in length, lays the eggs among small stones that are present under the reeds.This is done where the reeds grow at the upper side of the river and the water flows slow here. This environment is suitable for the eggs to stay without moving for approximately 5-6 months until the fish comes out. The fry fish that hatches will be of 3-8 centimeters in length. The fry fish, after reaching the fast flowing lower part of the river, will live there for about 4 years.
During the four year period, the fry fish grows into this smolt fish of 12-15 centimeters length and contributes to the second stage of development. After this, the smolt salmon fish moves into open sea and stays there for around five years.
In the third stage, after 5 years in open sea, development as adult salmon will complete the life cycle as these adult salmons are the ones that lay eggs later.
The difference in size is obvious in all the stages. While it takes only months for the eggs to get hatched, the period of development increases in the next two stages in years. Support is needed for the eggs to stay still, but the fishes don't need any. And, the speed of the river differs in upward manner as the stage changes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5703125 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18837872975 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4552975941 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149831175342 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602835613089 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793442421219 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104619972423 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809305883697 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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