The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows an automatic photo booth. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates how photo booth machine produce the quality photos of people by automatic means.
Overall, before people get their high-quality pictures of themselves, it is necessary for them to undergo number of special treatments. The process is sophisticated, so it requires the use of machinery.
In the initial stages of the process, the candidate has to submerge pay in coins into the input coinage. After that, the opportunity for chosen options is provided for person: there are two types of format, such as large format photo or 4 passport-sized specimens. Following this, it is possible to opt for color or black and white design of the photo, because you must take into account that passport photos are obliged to be colored always.
Moving to the last stages of the process, the photo cabinet has following special facilities. In the center of the box the adjustable stool is located. On the top of fronter wall there is a mirror, and the lens is slightly lower on the eye level. Once you push the rope, hanging above you a slightly to the left, you would see a light single flash in 3 seconds after pushing. The most significant detail is that the curtain must be closed at the moment of photo taking. Your photos will be delivered within a minute in the output box.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75892857143 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61343418997 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8724592596 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844770450964 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296435077771 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426203615341 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609593354168 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571163217002 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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