The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart details how many hours of unpaid work per week done by both married men and women in three categories, including without children, with 1-2 children and with more than 3 children.
Overall, the number of hours for unpaid work by married women is not only higher than married men but also have to work too much time, especially the married women has the highest hours of work that do not receive money.
It can be seen that the married women need to work the highest hours of work which they are not receive any salaries with more than 3 children, approximately less than 10 hours of the total. Besides, just over 50 hours of unpaid work with 1 to 2 children, making the married women the second highest option. Then, the lowest hours for the married women is the unpaid work without children, where the number is just 30 hours. Not surprisingly, the married men work fewer hours of unpaid work, with approximately 20 hours for all categories.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'received'.
Suggestion: received
...ighest hours of work which they are not receive any salaries with more than 3 children,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6432748538 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33147854581 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8877988613 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.333333333 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217340482967 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148753901501 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385939615001 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170517865252 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220917040849 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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