The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
The bar graph shown in the figure illustrates the information about average hours spent by men and women for unpaid works. Overall it would seem that married women works more that man for the unpaid jobs , irrespective of how many children they have .
On further exploring the details, it is found that working women work for 30 hours , when they have no children and it goes on increasing with the increase in the number of children. For 1-2 children women works for 50 hours a week , and for more than 3 children they work for 60 hours a week.
However, no significant change is observed in the working hours for men, with or without children. men nearly works for 20 hours a week. The reasons for less working time for men in household works, could be well justified by the working hours of their office. it is possible that, men spend their most of time in their job so they unable to help women in household work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...information about average hours spent by men and women for unpaid works. Overall ...
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Suggestion: ,
... works more that man for the unpaid jobs , irrespective of how many children they ...
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Suggestion: .
...espective of how many children they have . On further exploring the details, ...
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Suggestion: ,
...und that working women work for 30 hours , when they have no children and it goes ...
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Suggestion: ,
...children women works for 50 hours a week , and for more than 3 children they work ...
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Suggestion: Men
...ours for men, with or without children. men nearly works for 20 hours a week. The r...
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Suggestion: It
...d by the working hours of their office. it is possible that, men spend their most ...
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Suggestion:
...s possible that, men spend their most of time in their job so they unable to help...
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Suggestion:
...unable to help women in household work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58083832335 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30913451 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556886227545 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4032084185 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172404423763 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102786473185 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320959969499 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135570886974 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00744022045121 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.