Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Nation should pass a law in order to preserve any remaining wilderness in the areas in the state, I agree with the authors statement with some mild reservations in it.Today the entire world is suffering from natural calamity, and we all are very much aware that this is happening only due to anthropogenic activity, if we continue to interfere with nature this will only exacerbate the current situation and the result will be catastrophic which may even eradicate the life on earth.
Along with the saving of the planet the economic development of the country is also necessary, it is the economic development only which ensues the prosperity of people which entails food to eat, health facilities and good education. In order to thrive economy industries plays an impertinent role.And in order to establish industries large amount of land is required, so their is a need to pass a law which strictly prohibits the use of land for industries at some places such as biospheres, marsh land , places very rich in bio-diversities.
One may argue that if such kind of policy is made then it will severely effect the people living near to those areas their earning capacity will reduce drastically. In order to boost their economic growth government should convert those places into tourist place.Other than industries their are various ways in which economic gain can be obtained, one such way is to develop it as a tourist place, which is also a great source of income.In India their is a group of small island known Andaman and Nicobar Island’s which are famous for their pristine natural beauty.Government of India has placed strict rules that no person should carry polythene or plastic made things to those island such a policy of government has a great impact on their economic growth without disturbing natures balance.
In essence we should pass a law in order to protect wilderness areas, in such a way that the economic growth of the country should not be hindered.One way enact such a law is to convert places of high biodiversity into tourist place with strong rules and regulation on people in order to maintain decorum of that place
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 363.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93939393939 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77885532039 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509641873278 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 23.0359550562 260% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.372964641 60.3974514979 261% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 298.833333333 118.986275619 251% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5 23.4991977007 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242097849608 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112348191634 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422670691728 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14029916878 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354815324544 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 14.1392134831 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 48.8420337079 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.2143820225 232% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.