The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework, and gardening.)
The supplied graph contrast the data of men and women of a number of hours spent in unpaid work of a week. At a fleeting glance, it is noticeable that among all the three categories, a married woman does more pay less work.
As is observed from the graph, ladies who do not have any children spend almost 30 hours of a week while this proportion is almost twice in the case of 3+ adolescents. This workload is probably due to extra load of household and juvenile's responsibilities. However, even a mother of 1-2 kids invested around 50 hours in unpaid work.
Switching to the unsalaried work of males which does not show any significant variations at all. In fact, it is observed that a father of 3 children spends least hours in unrewarded work as compared to the without and 1-2 children. This might be because of the high requirement to the commitment of jobs because of financial gains to fulfill the basic necessities.
All in all, committed women do almost double household unpaid work as contrasted to the men.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spends the least'.
Suggestion: spends the least
...is observed that a father of 3 children spends least hours in unrewarded work as compared to...
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Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...cause of financial gains to fulfill the basic necessities. All in all, committed women do almo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67403314917 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78229323443 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0011430942 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213168366554 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914770978247 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690051234862 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134359614199 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391920863126 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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