the diagram below shows the changes which took place in a coastal area called Portland from 150 to 2007. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the diagrams below
the diagram illustrates how a coastal town named Portland developed over a 57-year period from 1950 to 2007.
Overall, it appears that Portland has become a much more modern town with far more shops and entertainment facilities. Another interesting point is that the network of road has been expanded, especially in the grassland areas.
Looking at details, in 1950, a large southern area which covered nearly half of the town was grassland. However, in 2007, there appeared two small street connecting the west and the east of the town to the main street. Along these street were ranges of shops and houses located to the south east of the town and another row of shops was on the opposite. in the south west area which is separated by two streets, an cinema has been constructed to offer for the recreational demand of the residents.
If we look at the north of the town, the coastal town has allocated a large area for industrial purpose on the left hand of the main road in 1950. However, in the next 57 year, all of these buildings has been replaced by a multi-storey car park connected with a swimming pool and an adjacent park. On the other hand of the main street, a new residential area has replaced the old car park in 1950. The main entrance of Portland was also be lengthened, embrace around the sea lying to the north. The sea itself was equipped with marina for Yacht in 2007.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the diagram illustrates how a coastal town ...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...other row of shops was on the opposite. in the south west area which is separated ...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...area which is separated by two streets, an cinema has been constructed to offer fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60642570281 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51491574668 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9377001524 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.5833333333 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121822150877 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478310585089 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490740374129 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861543896665 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595633840998 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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