The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.
The diagram illustrates how the Meteorology of Australian bareau cellects information about the weather within a minute in order to generate reliable forecasts.
At the first glance it is evident that the process consists of four stages, beginning with the incoming information and ending up with the brodcast.
First of all, incoming information collected by the satellite,radar and drifting buoy. After that,all data which is collect through the three technological devices going through the second stage called analysis and forecasting. Following this, various details analysed and forecasted by the satellite photo,radar data forecasted though the radar screen and sometime by the synoptic chart. Incoming data which is collected by the drifting buoy and all data forecasted by synoptic chart.
In the next stage, information pass through the preparing steps and all data prepared by the superior level of computer and internet facilities. Devices prepare all the gathering data and organize in a proper way for the final stage of brodcast.
After that,all data brodcast through Tv newsreader, radio and recorded announcement when they pass through the above three stage. Finally, people aware about weather up to a minute with the help of the unique technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed and forecasted by the satellite photo,radar data forecasted though the radar screen...
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...are all the gathering data and organize in a proper way for the final stage of brodcast. After...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51794871795 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85786916663 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2764920031 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206642982822 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874997709815 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109161460066 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129879213893 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13451477714 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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