The diagram depicts the production of electricity in hydroelectric power station. Overall, it is readily apparent that the process starts from holding River water in the Upper-level Reservoir and ends with transmitting electricity to the National Grid.
In detail, the process begins with holding water from River into High-level Reservoir. The water then flows through the Dam, which only opens during the daytime. After that, the water keeps flowing into Reversible turbines, which then powers Generator to produce electricity, which is then transferred into National Grid through Power lines. The excess of the water then enters the Lower-level Reservoir.
At night, the water from Lower-level reservoir then flows through the Reversible turbines, which pumps the water into Upper-level reservoir. The flow of water then stays on the pipeline until the Dam opens again at the daylight. After the Dam opens, the water goes into the High-level Reservoir and the cycle starts again.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (River) must be used with a third-person verb: 'waters'.
Suggestion: waters
...t the process starts from holding River water in the Upper-level Reservoir and ends w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50657894737 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66763944486 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9063972177 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0587823680807 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430646389332 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090751387696 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640722938671 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664268477121 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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