Currently, there are countries which have more young inhabitants than old citizens. There is an argument whether there are more pros than cons about this situation. In my opinion, the benefit of this circumstances exceed the drawbacks because of several reasons.
Firstly, younger generations tend to be more educated, as they are no longer live in a slavery or constant wars like their predecessors. As a result, this will lead to the existence of more knowledgeable and skillful people. These well-educated young adults will then work in various positions, including governmental and non-governmental jobs and therefore will help the development of their country.
Secondly, younger generations are more capable in using technology. As the time goes, technology advancement becomes more massive and affects a lot of aspects in our daily life, including jobs. With younger generations' capability in utilizing technology, it will be easier to produce more productive results in the workplace. For example, a lot of grocery shops with younger owners have used computer to record transactions while older owners still record transactions manually. As a consequence, younger owners can work faster and become more productive than the older owners.
In conclusion, the benefit of the situation where the number of younger generations is larger than the older generations exceed its downside because younger generations tend to be more educated therefore they can help to develop their country. Moreover, younger generations are more capable in using technology, which will lead to more productive result in doing a job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
...ituation. In my opinion, the benefit of this circumstances exceed the drawbacks beca...
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'generations'' or 'generation's'?
Suggestion: generations'; generation's
...aily life, including jobs. With younger generations capability in utilizing technology, it ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52610441767 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05118879594 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538152610442 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9706621134 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904163865485 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353109959336 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200429364162 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589376633318 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00732823063588 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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