At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In this modern era, many countries comprise a higher proportion of younger people than elderly people. This growing trend has associated benefits and drawbacks. However, this essay argues that the positive implications of this phenomenon outweigh the negative one. Firstly, this essay will demonstrate how the primary advantage associated with the skills of the younger population significantly contribute to the rise in the economy of any nation, and later, analyse how the major disadvantage, the sketchy knowledge about history and culture among youngsters hold less weight.
The younger people play an important role in the economic development of any country. This is due to the fact that younger generation is comparatively dynamic, smart, healthy and more productive than the older generation. The adults of this century are highly educated, competent and skilful in various fields of technology, such as engineering and medical. Therefore, it is irrefutable to say that our youthful generation is the active workforce and contribute a major part to lift the economy. In addition to this, the government collect major percentage of tax from the young people and this tax is invested in various development tasks. For instance, the report generated by the Income Tax Department of India clearly shows that 70% of the taxpayers are from the age group of 28-40.
Despite these advantages, the new generation lacks cultural and ethical values. Most of the adults have limited historical knowledge and are disrespectful. This is because of the fact that there is merely no elderly member in modern families and as a result, the youngsters nowadays do not get an opportunity to learn these values from the behaviour, experience and knowledge of the old people. Though old people are well-experienced, I feel that these senior citizens are dependent on younger one or government facilities, such as pension schemes for their financial needs. Moreover, due to health-related issues at such an old age, this group cannot contribute that much to the growth of a country as a younger group do. Therefore, I believe that the overall role our younger people play for the development of the country cannot be overlooked.
To conclude with the arguments given above, I firmly believe that the advantages of having an increased ratio of younger population outweigh the disadvantages. Even though, there are some positive aspects of having an older population that we should consider.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2103.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35114503817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95553618515 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4511938017 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167982689827 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499180077029 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423526741303 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105787827267 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295843959854 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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