Some people believe that nowadays too much money is being spent on weddings and birthdays. Why do you think it is happening? What can be done to improve the situation?
Opinions are divided on why people spend lavishly on occasions, such as weddings and birthdays. I believe that it is caused by peer pressure and to make these events memorable, and the situation could be improved by spreading awareness.
Grand celebrations are hosted for reasons related to keeping up with the Joneses and to create a phenomenal experience. With regard to the former, this trend of lavish weddings and birthday parties is popular to maintain the social status and to please the guests with a lavish invitation card, luxurious venue, gastronomical delights and elaborate gifts, as well as being the norm. As for making it a perfect day, bride and groom or the parents of children hosting a first birthday party expect this auspicious day to be perfect in all ways and to do so, they spend extravagantly on hiring wedding planners, decoration, designer clothes and photography so that they can cherish this moment lifetime and seek the guests' attention. Social media and movies are also responsible for their mind programming and creating such ideas and opinions.
Creating awareness programs to promote the benefits of ordinary celebrations offer the best chance to improve this situation of extravagant events. As far as spreading awareness is concerned, government-sponsored advertisements and movies could encourage the members of the public to spend less on weddings and birthday parties. These programs could be promoted by glamorous celebrities by setting themselves as an example for ordinary people to follow. Another policy that could be introduced is to limit the number of guests in such events or by setting a cap on maximum spending and imposing a fine for those who disobey the instructions. By doing so, people would be encouraged to spend less.
In conclusion, people squander money on auspicious occasions because of the influence of their peers. This situation could be alleviated by introducing new policies and awareness programs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 714, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guests'' or 'guest's'?
Suggestion: guests'; guest's
...erish this moment lifetime and seek the guests attention. Social media and movies are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31210191083 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00085860027 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563694267516 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.3528867405 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.307692308 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215336237439 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080265828724 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499911456846 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145304638016 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385759135073 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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