Write a letter to colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. You should:
– Describe the presentation
– Why was it important
– How did it help you.
Dear Mr. James,
I am writing to express my gratitude for giving me a book, which proved to be incredibly useful for preparing my presentation.
With regard to the presentation, I had to deliver a session on safety at the workplace and the possible measures an individual could take in order to ensure his own safety. This was an hour session and I am glad to inform you that it went well. All the ideas were comprehensive and covered all aspects of the topic. In fact, I was highly appreciated for my work by the whole team.
As far as the importance of the presentation is concerned, it was my first demonstration in front of the team including leaders and senior managers. My primary goal was to leave a positive impression on the audience and I was able to do so with your timely assistance. Once again, thank you.
As for the book, it is very informative and relevant to the topic. In fact, all the chapters are well-structured and easy to follow. It helped me in organizing my ideas and collect content for my slides. Most importantly, the language of the book is simple and easy to understand. I was also able to learn the topic-specific vocabulary from this book.
I am thankful to you for this act of kindness.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, as for, as to, in fact, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69333333333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93648315734 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591111111111 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.676248924 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22110122485 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707150820276 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598397303864 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12555062897 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039361693359 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.