Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you with a presentation at work. You should:
– Describe the presentation
– Why was it important
– How did it help you.
Dear Mr. Rick,
I am writing to express my gratitude for lending me your book for my presentation. The book on "Fitness and Diet" proved to be incredibly useful for my presentation.
With regard to the presentation, I had to deliver a two-hour session on the importance of fitness and a healthy diet for my peers. Moreover, the presentation was extremely comprehensive and covered all the aspects of the topic. Everybody liked the presentation and I was highly appreciated for shedding some light on this crucial topic.
As you know, I have recently joined this organization and this was my first session, so I wanted to make an outstanding impression in front of everyone. As it has been said that "The first impression is the last impression". Interestingly, this book not only helped me with the content but also with the organization of the ideas.
In addition to this, I had adopted a few sample fitness routines along with a diet plan from this book to make my presentation look more professional and the Jargons mentioned in the book was a cherry on the cake. Indeed this book was great support from you.
Thank you once again for such great help.
Yours' Sincerely,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... With regard to the presentation, I had to deliver a two-hour session on t...
^^
Line 17, column 215, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...d in the book was a cherry on the cake. Indeed this book was great support from you. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, so, in addition, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05392156863 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11565403678 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4561393785 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212502389469 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835771031246 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685285388462 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130230672208 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585030181887 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.