You want to arrange a conference for your company, and you need to ask one of your colleagues to give a presentation in this conference.
Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter include:
Details about the conference
Why you want your colleague to give the presentation
What arrangement you will do for this conference
Dear Mr. Adam,
I am writing to ask you to deliver a presentation at a conference that I am going to arrange for our company next week.
As far as details of the conference are concerned, I am conducting it on the "innovation in automobile industry" at the well-known hotel "The Taj" on Wednesday next week. This is the platform where prominent leaders from all over the world are present and brings innovative ideas along with them.
The reason why I want you to present is due to the fact that not only are you the subject matter expertise but also have won an award from the "department of the automobile" for your recent invention on controlling the speed of the electronic vehicles.
With regard to the arrangements, as there would be renowned industrialists and government officials participating in this event, I need to make sure that the facilities like airport transfer and accommodation would be smooth. From a presentation point of view, I have to make an arrangement for a mic and a projector. Lastly, to promote our organization, I am arranging t-shirts with our company logo embossed on them.
I am looking forward to seeing you delivering a presentation at this event.
Yours sincerely,
John
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, look, so, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06763285024 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36615501078 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1671584963 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.555555556 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229726007827 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959248910342 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721726515091 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121553852169 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659769207433 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 8.37731958763 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.