Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether good instructors are responsible for students' good grades or whether it is students' attitude that matters the most. In my opinion, an attitude is a key to success.
It is advocated by pupils that to achieve excellent marks in exams a student should be blessed with an educated tutor. It is because of the fact that a teacher who has higher qualifications in a particular subject can help students with good teaching strategies to excel in the examination. A qualified coach picks the best teaching methodology to make a student learn at a rapid pace and without putting any extra effort, which in turn helps them to conquer in the exam. Furthermore, a highly educated tutor not only help students in their studies but also shares tips to build focus and to improve concentration.
However, the above argument can be rejected because of the lack of concentration in students and their attitude towards learning. If the student is eager to learn and want to succeed in academics, no one can be a barrier in his path. It has been correctly said that "where there is a will, there is a way". With regard to the saying, if a student has a positive attitude towards learning, he can study with the help of the internet also, as there are numerous online training sessions available readily. Nowadays, there are so many sources available that can help achieve top grades in the exam only if the student is determined to learn. Recently, "The times" has published an article that reflects the efforts invested by an ordinary boy to crack an IIT exam without getting professionally trained by a qualified teacher.
To conclude, a good teacher can help in shaping individuals' academic path, but I believe that self-determination is the key to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...e blessed with an educated tutor. It is because of the fact that a teacher who has higher qualifications...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97039473684 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94210460114 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6748473232 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17754205858 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070569287122 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458470574567 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128130243775 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511592727312 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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