Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether the best tutor is responsible for any student's academic excellence, or whether it is the result of sincere efforts of an individual student. In my opinion, eagerness to learn is the key to success.
The idea of scoring high grades under the supervision of a qualified instructor is advocated by people due to the fact that teachers are highly experienced and they can motivate students well. With regard to experienced teachers, it is believed that they can use the best teaching methodologies and their subject expertise in the class to guide the pupils. Therefore, time-to-time feedback by such mentors enables students to outperform in the class. It is also thought that continuous support from a good trainer encourages children to get excellent marks by sharing tips and tricks to stay calm and focus during exam conditions.
However, the above arguments can be rejected because strong self-determination is the deciding factor to achieve any goal. As far as support from teachers is concerned, even the efforts of world's best professors would be in vain if students would not be self-concentrated and willing to learn. As it is rightly said that 'where there is a will, there is a way', I believe that dedication to attain success is most important than anything else. As for the idea of teaching strategies, while it may be true that these techniques play a vital role in learning anything new but at the same time, there are abundant resources available on the internet that can help young aspirants to learn. For instance, there have been many successful entrepreneurs in the world, who had never attended any formal classroom training but still touched the sky with their willpower.
In conclusion, even though the role of the best tutors helps to shape an individual's academic career but I believe that self-determination is the key factor to attain the best academic results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the best'.
Suggestion: worlds the best
...chers is concerned, even the efforts of worlds best professors would be in vain if students...
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Line 9, column 443, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s is most important than anything else. As for the idea of teaching strategies, wh...
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Line 13, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
... role of the best tutors helps to shape an individuals academic career but I believe that self...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0786163522 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98889238858 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0291723886 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.583333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127167426814 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464737375419 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310085125008 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760877578661 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250874129763 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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