Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.
In your letter, you should tell:
– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased
– what you will do if it is increased.
Dear Mr John,
I am Ell Green and residing in one of your rented apartments. My apartment address is 749, Woodside Avenue. I am writing in response to your letter in which you have informed about the increment in monthly rent from Rs. 10000 to Rs.12000.
With regards to the rent increase, I would like to take a reference from the signed rental agreement, where we have agreed on a fixed monthly rent of Rs. 10000 for one year commencing from June 1, 2019, to May 31, 2019. As I have been staying in this apartment for 3 months only as your tenant, I feel that it would be inappropriate to increase the rent in such a short span and would be against the agreement. In addition to this, I am paying rent which is already on the higher side and maintenance cost is also not included in this.
I hope that a generous person like you would understand my genuine concern for raising the rent and reconsider your plan to revise the rent. In case, you still feel the need for increasing the rent then I am sorry to inform you that in that case, I would have to take legal action against you for violating the contract signed between us.
I anticipate cooperation from you on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Ell Green
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, still, then, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1014.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52678571429 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4683221019 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7113591265 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.4 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293993756414 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123728036225 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733670118078 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178235185904 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714413961056 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.