Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.In your letter, you should tell:– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased– what you will do if it is increased.

Essay topics:

Your landlord wants to increase your house rent. Write a letter to him to explain your situation.

In your letter, you should tell:

– why you think the rent shouldn’t be increased

– what you will do if it is increased.

Dear Mr. Momtazi

I am writing this letter regard to your decision concerning the rent of my house. I had shocked when I received your message. As you know, I have been living in this apartment about 5 years, in my point of view, our flat is very comfortable, convenience and has easy access to the hypermarket, cinema, city center, national park and so on. I cannot deny the fact that, one of the decisive factors that I unwilling to lost this house is commuting to my workplace is not time-consuming.

During this time that I have been living here, I have always paid rent on time, I also have tried to take care of the house properly and any of neighbors is not discontent of me. Since, I am familiar with home lease rules and regulations, you are not compelled me to pay more money for rent. Notwithstanding by the fact that I have a full time work, but I find it difficult to provide my house rent.

I would be most grateful if you would consider my economic situation and reconsideration your decision.

Thanks in advance for your cooperation in this matter.

Yours Sincerely

Mansoureh sheikh

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hocked when I received your message. As you know, I have been living in this ...
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Line 15, column 43, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...twithstanding by the fact that I have a full time work, but I find it difficult to provid...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72222222222 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81354384658 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6743998595 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232857178259 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101289914553 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582217666882 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120416250666 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071476521849 0.0580467560999 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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