Some sports are extremely dangerous to the players. Why do people participate in such sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.
Sports are an integral part of human lives. Although a few sports are immensely hazardous to the sportspersons, some precautionary measures could be taken to avoid risks associated with it.
Nowadays, the lifestyle of every individual has become sedentary. As a result of which everyone wants some adventure in their life. To achieve such an adventure, they involve themselves in some dangerous sports. Sky diving and bungee jumping are the perfect examples of exceptionally vicious games. Despite knowing the fact that this could be life-threatening, people love to take part in such games because of the fun, fame, and thrill involved in this. Furthermore, a few people participate in such games to become famous on social media by keeping their lives at stake.
However, there are some preventive actions that could be considered before getting involved in such hazardous games. First of all, these sports should be performed under the proper guidance of a certified instructor. In addition to this, a few tips and some practice sessions could be undertaken before performing on the actual platform. Also, it is the responsibility of the instructor to instill all the pros and cons of such dangerous sports into the player's minds.
To conclude, such hazardous sports could cripple the life of a player. However, if the public educates themselves with some basic knowledge and training beforehand, then such sports would bring lots of joy and thrill in human lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... every individual has become sedentary. As a result of which everyone wants some a...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: SKY_DIVING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'skydiving'?
Suggestion: Skydiving
...ve themselves in some dangerous sports. Sky diving and bungee jumping are the perfect exam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21518987342 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86194167974 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599156118143 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5238494191 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2857142857 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356947402166 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113382307693 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706144957071 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215077255206 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248735382189 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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