Some sports are extremely dangerous to the players. Why do people participate in such sports? Tell some measures to avoid the risks involved.
It is true that there are sports that are significantly risky for a person’s health; however, people participate in them. In this essay, I will consider what reasons are behind this trend and what can be done in order to reduce the danger associated with it.
The main reason, why human beings take part in dangerous sports activities in modern society lives in a relatively safe environment but evolutionary humankind was hard-wired to a danger. Thus, some individuals cannot live without adrenalin rush and are constantly trying to compensate for lack of it by participating in different high-risk sports. For example, personally, I am an office worker and sometime I feel that there is no enough adventure in my life. It is kind of boring and dull. That why I started to attend pole-dance class. Meanwhile, my coworker was a sky surfer and he had got severely injured once and still continued to do that because he was able to feel some owe only in the air.
However, such sports as scuba-diving or rugby take its tolls, and it is our responsibility to make them less risky in order to prevent severe injuries or death. First, the most dangerous sport should be a band or permitted on certain conditions only. For instance, a person who would like to take part in this kind of sports should be completely healthy and trained athlete; beginners should not be allowed to take part in it. As well as this, even professional athletes should make certain precocious such as wearing protective gear and follow safety instructions precisely without unnecessary risks. To illustrate, let us consider such sport as skiing in the rocky mountains, sportsmen should never go skiing after a snowfall because it is hazardous for an avalanche.
In conclusion, there are plenty of life-threatening sports out there and people still take part in it because by doing it they feel alive. Dangerous sports activities cause adrenaline rush which kind of addictive and a person constantly needs a new dose. Some actions can be taken for reducing the risk of injuries and death such as implementing strict rules and obligate sportsmen to wear protective gear.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96952908587 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86394175097 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573407202216 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0081224747 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247149755251 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760341419354 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473054188301 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153338143739 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442506901596 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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