Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divide on whether one should prevent climate change or whether find a way to cope up with it. I believe it is better to avert atmospheric changes.
Although it is generally thought that new techniques should be invented to adapt to climate changes, doing so, would be a short-term solution. This is due to the fact that most of the techniques that enable humankind to live in changing environment have future repercussions. The evidence for this can be seen in the use of electronic devices, such as air conditioners and central heating units, to control the indoor temperature during extreme weather conditions. Though the use of such devices provides relief in current conditions, the harmful gases released by these devices would contribute more towards climate change in the near future.
Instead of looking for solutions to live with climate change, prevention techniques should be taken under consideration to reduce its effect.
The reason for this is that if appropriate steps are not taken to control this situation now, it would have unknown devastating effects. This also means that ignorance of atmospheric change is a threat to biodiversity on planet earth. For these reasons, the ultimate goal should be to develop technologies that are environmental friendly rather than the one those provide benefits that are short-lived and have adverse future ramifications.
In conclusion, I disagree with the proposition that new methods should be developed to live with climate change. On the contrary, the focus should be on finding ways to prevent such changes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25984251969 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90297138368 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2791327701 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189986076562 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758884981377 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703140913454 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130722987138 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066794329922 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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