Some people believe that educational qualifications always bring success, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether educational qualifications always bring good fortune or not. I believe that it is not always true to get success post one's education.
The idea that academic qualification brings favorable results all the time is advocated by the people on the basis of job and business opportunities. With regard to the former, it has been believed that if a person pursues a degree in engineering, medical science, and master of business administration, the possibilities of getting a handsome job increase at a rapid pace. It is also thought that, after achieving a good level of education, a lot of business opportunity door opens up. A qualified person brings up lots of creative business ideas and becomes an entrepreneur. Also, the financial condition can not be left unseen as far as starting a business is concerned. A good level of educations totally changes the person's perspective to see the whole world and helps him to achieve a great height of victory.
However, the above arguments can be rejected because not everyone who undergoes a good level of educational training would have a job opportunity. For example, there are thousands of engineering students are getting passed out every year in India, but not all of them are able to get a placement in a well-known organization and are struggling every day. As far as the idea of business opportunity is concerned, not every individual has the proper resources to implement their ideas. They complete their education by asking for a loan from a bank which they have to return post completion of their studies. So, starting a new business requires some capital investment which is not possible for such candidates as they have to clear the education loan first.
In conclusion, I reject the idea that educational qualification brings success every time because it is not applicable to everyone as we can see a lot of unemployed educated population and lack of financial resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0245398773 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05772065658 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558282208589 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.463283727 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153570332483 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059423004307 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682571788554 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131115643259 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089550198704 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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