Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, others believe that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether students should be allotted study work to complete at home. I believe that homework is essential for a child's growth.
The idea of not giving homework to children is advocated by some parents because they think that post-school studies will put an extra burden on the shoulders of their child. They will not get time to participate in other activities like sports, music and so on, and this can have adverse ramifications on their physical health.
With regard to the former, they believe that the children already spend half of their day in school and asking them to perform the studies while they are at home, will make them bookworm, and as a result, they will start neglecting other outdoor activities which are as important as studies. Child obesity is another concern, they have for their children for ignoring physical activities due to the pressure of homework.
However, the above viewpoint can be rejected because allocating homework to a child will be beneficial for his intellectual growth and can have a disciplined lifestyle. Completing the assignments given by the tutor can help to build the concepts to solve a problem and certainly helps in developing mental strength. Most of the students are afraid of mathematics because of lots of formulas and equations, and if they have not been given study work to solve after school hours, their problem-solving capability will never develop. It has been said that "Practice makes a man perfect". Once they start devoting time for studies at home they will understand the value of education and time as well. Furthermore, this will help them to face any competitive exam with confidence. One proverb states that "As you sow, so shall you reap". So if a child spends a decent amount of time in gathering knowledge then at a later stage he will be rewarded for his efforts.
To conclude, it would not be a wise decision to avoid giving homework to children because it may lead to their bleak future and affects their physical health too.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, as a result, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75222849624 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2537889985 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206748965881 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730531091354 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668822908907 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146300812048 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420703310608 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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