You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to a friend.
In your letter:
- tell your friend what the event was
-explain why you think your friend would like the event
- invite them to come to the event with you
Dear John,
It was great to get a call from you yesterday. I'm writing to tell you about a cultural event that Tracy and I attended last week and wanted to invite you and Emma next month for this event.
As for the event, it is conducted during winters in the slap-bang of the city by my Engineering college students and is fun-filled with various cultural events, folk dance, art exhibition, and last but not the least a large variety of mouth-watering food options are also available at the venue.
As I know, you and Emma are big food lovers and love to explore different cultures. You'll definitely enjoy visiting this event as it'll not only offer you a variety of delicious cuisines but also help you in preparing your project thesis which you are writing on different cultures across the globe. Furthermore, you'll witness the most aesthetically pleasing art exhibition.
Having said that, I'd like to invite you to this wonderful cultural event. While we were studying together last year, you promised to visit me and believe me this is the best time of the year to come to India. We would be honored to have you and Emma as our guests for this entire stay here. I assure you this event would be the most memorable event of your life.
Hoping to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
Adam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63043478261 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45892149042 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.1491174822 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8181818182 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297598195055 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125354810859 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920930023542 0.0603063233224 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154222675799 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743016606104 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.