The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the generation of electricity inside a hydroelectric power plant.
Overall, the full-scale model involves a two-way process running throughout the day and consisting of five main stages.
The process of producing electricity commences with the water being stored in a high altitude reservoir, which is followed by the movement of the water out of the reservoir through the opening of the dam. Subsequently, the water flows down into the power station located nearby, waiting to produce electricity. The next step involves the generator being activated by the pressure of water flowing through the turbines linked to the generator. Then, the electricity will be produced and sent out directly to power lines and the national grid for usage.
At night, with a reverse process, water is pumped from the low-level reservoir to the steep pipeline through the former turbines, during which produces electricity. The water later encounters the closed gateway into the high-level reservoir, leading to the reverse direction of the water current and pushing the water down to the power station, leveraging the potential energy to generate additional amount of electricity.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rate additional amount of electricity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52173913043 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86028121841 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.998697901 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.23603664747 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119506358863 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696073082909 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773108668616 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104587411684 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939796238784 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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