Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are people stating that the educational and health care funds should be subsidized or made free of charge by the government. In my opinion, I definitely agree with this statement for two main reasons.
Firstly, nowadays people often have to pay a big amount of taxes monthly complying with the civilians’ responsibility, these taxes cause many to suffer financial hardships which is now a very controversial problem. It is quite preposterous for the people whose incomes are beneath the average line and still have to cut out a big portion of it to give it to the government. As a result, many parents can not afford their children’s monthly tuition fees and still pay their bills, which forces many students to leave schools due to families’ financial conditions. Moreover, if the government can provide free education for students, it will have long-term benefits on the nation’s economy as well as be fruitful.
Secondly, many people are suffering from lethal diseases without receiving any decent treatment. Since a healthy population plays a pivotal role to have an energetic workforce and a thriving nation, it is obviously essential for the government to take actions to alleviate the prices of healthcare services and share the bills with its citizens. For instance, many developed countries like the United States have enacted laws and bills to make medical care free for some particular groups of people.
In conclusion, it is urgently necessary for the government to provide free education and medical care to everyone. As these two things are the fundamental demands for everyone, the government should now make quick actions to reach that goal.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21771217712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86226055849 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60147601476 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1788774117 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268825165006 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109564492336 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935863006299 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195879799168 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122805572293 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.