Education and healthcare are both indispensable to all the people in the country. However, people often argue that both the healthcare and education should be complimentary for every people. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the statement that I opine that people should be charged when using the education and healthcare.
It is mandatory for everyone to pay the tuition fees for admission to any levels of education, particularly the university. As the higher education acts an essential role for the future employment career by providing students with abundant resources of learning and imparting the professional courses for every pupil, paying the admission fees is necessary. One salient example can be seen in most of the universities in Taiwan, facilities such as the library, making most of the useful information accessible to every student. Furthermore, people who attend to school by free may abuse the learning resources, and eventually influence the quality of learning. As a result, I certainly believe that it is important for everyone to pay the money for the utilizing of education for the sake of its valuable academic environment and the maintenance of its quality.
As for healthcare, it is necessary to charge every citizen when going to the hospital or clinics. The medication is provided for those who actually need rather than those with unnecessary purpose. A case in point is that some countries provide their citizens with health insurance. Nevertheless, people abuse the medical resources by virtue of its cheap cost. This scenario accelerates the depletion of useful medication, and therefore imposes negative influence on those who virtually demand the medication.
By way of conclusion, for the better exploitation of the resources of healthcare and education, people should be charged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'complimented'?
Suggestion: complimented
... the healthcare and education should be compliment for every people. From my perspective, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, as for, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41463414634 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04586620296 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5401103341 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227434946539 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804905768583 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582626237275 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148849803228 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648064350373 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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