The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

The above image illustrates the process of producing electricity in hydroelectric energy location.
Overall, it is clear that electricity has been generated in 4 diverse steps in order to have ability to be send to national grid.
At first, river water has been conducted to a high level reservoir which is surrounded by a Dam at its right. The intake which has located below the Damp is opened thorough the day which is not at nights. Therefore, throughout the days, when gate is not closed, water has flew to power station to produce energy.
Afterwards, as much as electricity has been made, has gone to power lines and then to national grids. Also, in reversible turbines, during days it operates generator which is gone to low-level reservoir. At nights, it is not allowed to go to low-level part, as a result, it is pumped into high-level reservoir which is totally the opposite way of the whole mentioned procedure.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 272, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'flown'.
Suggestion: flown
...ays, when gate is not closed, water has flew to power station to produce energy. Af...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87341772152 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79357079997 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4284670006 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.25 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155246650295 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683252516767 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04727179085 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944454099602 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207263858828 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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