The diagram illustrates the process in which a solid material, the corn, creates a n alcohol used as fuel, the ethanol fuel.
Overall, it is clear that there are nine stages from picking the corn, adding some water and separating it so as to produce the ethanol fuel and transport it.
Initially, the corn is picked up in order to be stored. Then, the corn is put into a mill, where the process of cooking will be started. In this stage, by adding water to this raw material, the corn, it is being cooked for 4 hours long. The next stage consists of converting the corn into alcohol by fermenting it for 48 hours.
At the sixth stage, the corn is separated in oder to create a by-product, which is solid. The leftover of the solid is a liquid substance which produces the ethanol after a ourification of 5 hours. After this, the ethanol fuel is ready to be stored. Finally, the fuel is transported to the companies which use this fuel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ich a solid material, the corn, creates a n alcohol used as fuel, the ethanol fue...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rn, adding some water and separating it so as to produce the ethanol fuel and transport ...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g the corn into alcohol by fermenting it for 48 hours. At the sixth stage, th...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...stance which produces the ethanol after a ourification of 5 hours. After this, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49418604651 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46371038234 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5620679929 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287697579488 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120549845124 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820364143579 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205704443086 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751366485023 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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