The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity from geothermal power.
Overall, the production of electricity by geothermal power plant involves five main steps starting from cold water to the electricity produced in generator and the distribution of that electricity.
At the first stage in the producing electricity, cold water is pumped down to the ground from a reservoir to the injection well by a 4.5 kilometres length tube. Subsequently, a geothermal zone is used to convert cold water to hot water. In other words, the geothermal zone also is known as hot rocks, which heat up cold water by moving it through the geothermal zone. The next step is that hot water is pumped up from the production well into a condenser in order to generate steams.
The last two stages are accomplished above ground at the power plant. Firstly, once steams have been generated in the condenser, they are transferred to a turbine and makes the turbine to spin. Ultimately, a generator, which is powered by the rotation of the turbine, produces electricity, which after that is distributed into an electrical grid via power lines.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, well, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06951871658 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95486363133 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55614973262 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8784248646 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125185602689 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585049723216 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445533257885 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948087932291 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349057661786 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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