The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The proceduce of using geothermal energy to produce electricity was illustrated by the diagram.
Overall, it is a method that transfer cold water to the electricity by using the heat of geothermal and a generator.
Fisrt of all, the tranformation of the form of water was shown in the diagram. First, the cold water pumped down through a tube of 4.5 km and then enter the injection well. then, it will be pass through the geothermal zone which was under ground and made by many hot rocks. Finally, the water will become hot and enter the production well to pump up to the condenser which set on the ground.
After that, the hot water will arrival to the condenser and transfer to the stream. Meanwhile, those stream from the condenser will provide power to the turbine and make it run so as to turn on the generator that will produce electricity.
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...othermal zone which was under ground and made by many hot rocks. Finally, the wat...
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...become hot and enter the production well to pump up to the condenser which set on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, so, then, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66887417219 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58951406416 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543046357616 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8130993072 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.125 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11676219181 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604511895508 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764337070062 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10313922161 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832000149234 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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