The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

The flow chart illustrates the emission of electricity through geothermal energy.

Most noticeably of all, it can be seen that first cold water is drown inside ground to about 4.5 km than water will get pump down into the injection well than it will flow towards the production well through hot rocks which is known as Geothermal Zone. Afterward hot water will pump up inside condenser.

So on, steam will be released which will flow inside turbine and it will get power through steam. Second lastly, power portion will be send inside generator which run through turbine and finally from generator electricity will be produces and with the help of wires electricity will transport on geothermal power plant.

To sum up, electricity is produced through water and there is 5 steps process for electricity emission.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'drowned'.
Suggestion: drowned
...it can be seen that first cold water is drown inside ground to about 4.5 km than wate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, lastly, second, so, well, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54150728098 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9310794442 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.052189372312 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323229333241 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254694090933 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424125706175 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155468995618 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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