The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The flow chart illustrates the stages involved in manufacturing instant noodles, from transportation of starting material and all the way to sealing end products.

First on, flour is loaded upon a dedicated truck and transitioned into the specialized industrial plant. In the first part of the machine, flour is introduced from an upper hopper to be mixed with the laterally injected fluids. As soon as they homogenize, they pass into rollers that give the mixture its appropriate form as dough sheets.

The sheets, then, go through two diminution stages. They are firstly cut into parallel strips and are afterwards compressed into discs of noodles. With oil applied on them, those discs undergo automated processes of cooking and drying. Once cooked, the noodles are packaged into standard cups, where additives are introduced and proper labels placed.

In short, the production of instant noodles is a multi-staged mechanized process that starts with transportation and ends with the sealing of final products.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, then, in short

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43396226415 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86879331429 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1696889772 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0576029970825 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219532578483 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311864452223 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401793369023 0.15604864568 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255442655551 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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