The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The given schematic illustrates Instant noodle manufacturing process. According to the diagram, the process to manufacture instant noodles involves 8 major steps or points.

The first step involves transferring Flour, which is brought from some other location, to Storage silos which are located at some distance from the Mixer and rest of the production line. The second step involves Mixing flour which was earlier stores in silos with Water and oil. Then, it can be deduced considering given information that the dough formed in the previous step, is rolled into sheets using multiple rollers in the next step. Later, this sheet of dough is cut into several strips of fixed widths from where it is converted to Noodle discs in the fifth step. Sixth step involves cooking the disks using oil and drying them. The noodle is placed into cups along with a mix of Vegetables and Spices. In the last step of this production process the cups are Labelled using readymade Labels shown in the diagram. Also, this step involves sealing the cups.

To conclude, it can be said that Instant Noodle production is somewhat complex process and involves several steps or procedures.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06701030928 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44628227107 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5505268437 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146059368718 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799500570749 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108771330196 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174088557216 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139480217961 0.0819641961636 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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