The given picture broadens everyone's horizon when it demonstrates the process of producing instant food, namely noodles step by step.
Generally, industries will make noodles in 8 steps, from mixing ingredients to labelling, sealing, and selling to consumers through grocery stores. The way of manufacturing this dish is divided into 2 main stages: processing in a sterile environment and packaging.
In the first phase, the flour is taken from storage silos and transported into the factories to be mixed with oil as well as water. After blending together, the rollers have the responsibility for flattening the mixture into thin dough sheets before cutting pieces of dough into small strips and shape them into noodles discs. The noodles will then be taken to a huge pot of boiling oil for deep frying and they will pass through a drying machine to remove the excess oil. Next, there are countless plastic cups or bags prepared to contain the noodles, vegetables (spring onions, small chopped carrots,...), and spices (chilies, pepper, salt,...).
Entering the final stage - packaging, the dedicated machines will be used to label the information of the product whereas there will be another appliance that is responsible for carefully pack the products before selling them to the consumers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...les spring onions, small chopped carrots,..., and spices chilies, pepper, salt,......
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ts,..., and spices chilies, pepper, salt,.... Entering the final stage - packagi...
^^
Line 3, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...., and spices chilies, pepper, salt,.... Entering the final stage - packaging, th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28155339806 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71977673077 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684466019417 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8021826061 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824185035318 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358753001847 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337906727216 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551197395919 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039494256898 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.