the diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

Essay topics:

the diagram below shows how orange juice is produced

The process illustrates several steps of producing orange juice.
As can be seen from the picture, it is precisely evident that the linear diagram involves as number of stages, starting from collecting the fresh water and culminating wwith the distribution of packed juice to supermarkets.
In the first place, fresh oranges are collected and then delivered to a processing plant by a truck. Following this, a designated machine which is responsible for the cleanliness of aranges will wash them before being extracted by a squeezing machine. Solid waster after this step is used as animal’s food supply. The fresh squeezed juice can then either be packed for selling at the supermarket or transferred to another factory or evaporation. The refrigerator truck ensures fresh juice is kept in cool temperature while moving.
During the evaporation process, the water is removed via a evaporator machine. Concentrated juice is then canned and transported to a warehouse before being mixed with water for the second time at the factory. Affter packaging, they are distributed to supermarkets or shops, ready to be purchased

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 59, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ation process, the water is removed via a evaporator machine. Concentrated juice ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, so, then, while, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34831460674 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99848991999 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.800534185 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122890392392 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482206412858 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505704750398 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088524426636 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498960441038 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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