In these days, it is claimed that there is a big difference between men and women’s sport shows on television channels. From my point of view, I believe that women should get as much coverage as men’s and i will discuss my reasons in this essay.
On the other hand, there are two main reasons why men are often chosen for sport shows. Firstly, the dominance of men’s sport due to a large proportion of male viewers so TV channels tend to produce sport programs for men, which make them to increase income and reputation For instance, most of audiences in football nowadays is men, who tend to perform better than women in sports such as boxing and body buildings while women show greater preference for shopping and beauty channels.
On the other hand, i believe that people who support the idea of equal coverage of male and female athletes on TV think that would empower the women’s role in sport and discourage gender discrimination. Furthermore, the media gave more exposure to female sporting events, thereby narrowing the gap between women’s and men’s sports. According to a survey conducted by NCC news in Australia, women’s sport leagues are not often shown on TV so the public do not know who they are. Therefore, Achievement of female sports figures shown on TV can encourage those with potential to embark from sponsors, which in turn may positively affect rates of sportswomen.
In conclusion, why women’s sport shows are not popular in this day and age result from these reasons and I definitely believe that it is crucial to ensure equal coverage of women’s sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89705882353 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60088143414 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566176470588 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2126283322 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7777777778 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498156077458 0.244688304435 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201257869714 0.084324248473 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832942800678 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292544703129 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736787195381 0.056905535591 129% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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